Why did you leave the white screen?
It's fine that you're submitting a flash that you didn't get to finish due to a virus, but why in the world would you just leave a white screen at the end? Couldn't you have just put "The End - I lost the rest of this movie do to a virus blah blah blah" or something? I mean it's pretty crappy just to let the whole song go and have a white screen. It's irritating and made me give you a lower score because you didn't take 5 seconds out of your time to fix it.
What was the point in making this?
You traced (not that well either, but it doesnt even matter) and used the crap english song. Tributes aren't just traced things... this has no creativity at all. Sorry to be harsh, but it's true. I don't understand why you would make this and expect anything above a 0.
It's fine if you did it for practice and all, but don't expect anyone to think you're any good. Tracing is fine, but you didn't make anything original out of it. I've seen plenty of traced DB/Z stuff, but at least they come up with new storylines, so that it can be somewhat original.
Hehe. Actually the point of making this is for my college work. I am not doing some new storyline and all cause that'd be using Nobuhiro's characters in my own stuff and that would be worse. Sorry to hear you don't like it but just so you know other guys have told me to take pride in my work!
Awesome.
It's hard to go wrong with a Contra flash... which is possibly the greatest game ever. One thing I remembered while watching this is that I always used to make them hump the ground during the level where you see them from the back and they lay down. I was a weird kid. :|
Hate that song.
Wow, I've never hateda song so much... I felt like stabbing my eardrums to make it stop. I ended up having to turn it down and just enjoy the visuals instead. Great visuals, btw... stylistically it was awesome. Some great water effects. Don't know what it is, but that song just really irritated me. Some weird emo crap. Other than that, it was good.
Ha! I've never, ever heard Tricky referred to as Emo before. Sorry that it wasn't to your liking. :P
I'm glad you liked the visuals however, and that despite revulsion to the song you saw fit to give it a seven! Yay!
Thanks for reviewing (and airing your grievance)!
Need new voice actor.
I think eatmorchikin6464 was referring to the voice actor's accent. Not sure if it was asian, but it sure sounded that way. The acting wasn't bad, but last time I checked Peter Parker didn't have an accent. :P I would suggest finding someone else to voice him. Needs some music maybe too. But other than that it was really cool and original. Good job... looking forward to the next episodes.
Cool, but you should only have 1 set of subtitles.
It wouldn't be that difficult to replace the Spanish text with English instead of having them both. It is annoying to read the text at the top of the screen (should be at the bottom) and even more annoying to read it when theres other text there in the middle. Just submit the spanish language one to a spanish site and the English language one to here.
Other than that it was very good. Good writing (need to have a proof reader, though for grammar) and cool graphics. This series looks like it will be cool. Keep it up.
Cool song. Nice Frame by frame
I liked the frame by frame... Looks more like a practice Flash than anything else, but keep it up and you should be able to put out a nice one.
Can you please tell me what the song is called though and who it is by?
Good for a traced movie.
I think it's obvious that you're tracing from some anime shows like DB/Z and Kenshin, but that's fine with me (it's pretty much the same as using Sprites, but actually a bit harder)... as long as you don't try and deny it.
Anyway, the story is the most important part and it's much improved over your Dragonball series (which wasn't very good because it was a weird DB ripoff). Keep working on your writing skills and you might be able to pull off a nice looking series.
"It's funny because it's true."
I've suffered through some of these "Video Art" classes in College and I wish someone would have submitted one of these things to the teacher because it's exactly what I was thinking the whole time. You wouldn't believe some of the BS that goes on in that class and how the teacher manages to find a million meanings for crap video art performances.
The ending in the crib was great.
Good job, keep em coming.
Last one? Say it ain't so!
Holy shit, that was AMAZING! This has to be one of the highest quality flash movies EVER made. Granted, there wasn't a lot of action, but the attention to detail was unreal. I watched all of the previous episodes and you've really improved a lot. It's sad to see that someone who has grown to such an amazing level in Flash is suddenly going to stop. I would highly discourage that.
If you really want to make the comics, make them, but you should then use them as storyboards for a Flash version. Even if you put half the effort into them that you put into Ep.5, they'd still turn out great.
And to those of you who give this low ratings for no voices, you're nuts. The voices would have ruined the quality because (unless you pay) there are almost NO good voice actors for flash movies. It's sad, but true. And (as we see here) they are usually not very reliable, since they're not being paid.
Anyway, I beg of you to continue this in Flash. Webcomics don't have a great venue like newgrounds does, so you'll have a difficult time getting your webcomic as noticed as your flash. Plus, you'd be robbing us and yourself of some potentially amazing Flash work. I've seen em all, and the skill displayed in ep.5 has blown me away. Easily top 10 Flash of all time.
Webcomics: I really don't want my series to be exposed so much anymore, which is why I'm switching platforms now.
Even if it's at one of my sites which only a handful of people know the URL to.
I do all this for my own enjoyment and improvement... Had second thoughts on submitting this movie at the beginning..
Anyway thanks for the large comment!
T'is a really big motivation boost!! :]
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