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[Legion]

Why did you leave the white screen?

It's fine that you're submitting a flash that you didn't get to finish due to a virus, but why in the world would you just leave a white screen at the end? Couldn't you have just put "The End - I lost the rest of this movie do to a virus blah blah blah" or something? I mean it's pretty crappy just to let the whole song go and have a white screen. It's irritating and made me give you a lower score because you didn't take 5 seconds out of your time to fix it.

[CONTRA: Part 1]

Awesome.

It's hard to go wrong with a Contra flash... which is possibly the greatest game ever. One thing I remembered while watching this is that I always used to make them hump the ground during the level where you see them from the back and they lay down. I was a weird kid. :|

[The Surface of the Water]

Hate that song.

Wow, I've never hateda song so much... I felt like stabbing my eardrums to make it stop. I ended up having to turn it down and just enjoy the visuals instead. Great visuals, btw... stylistically it was awesome. Some great water effects. Don't know what it is, but that song just really irritated me. Some weird emo crap. Other than that, it was good.

BlackmarketKraig responds:

Ha! I've never, ever heard Tricky referred to as Emo before. Sorry that it wasn't to your liking. :P

I'm glad you liked the visuals however, and that despite revulsion to the song you saw fit to give it a seven! Yay!

Thanks for reviewing (and airing your grievance)!

[SpiderMan - Chapter 0]

Need new voice actor.

I think eatmorchikin6464 was referring to the voice actor's accent. Not sure if it was asian, but it sure sounded that way. The acting wasn't bad, but last time I checked Peter Parker didn't have an accent. :P I would suggest finding someone else to voice him. Needs some music maybe too. But other than that it was really cool and original. Good job... looking forward to the next episodes.

[Abril: Primavera I]

Cool, but you should only have 1 set of subtitles.

It wouldn't be that difficult to replace the Spanish text with English instead of having them both. It is annoying to read the text at the top of the screen (should be at the bottom) and even more annoying to read it when theres other text there in the middle. Just submit the spanish language one to a spanish site and the English language one to here.

Other than that it was very good. Good writing (need to have a proof reader, though for grammar) and cool graphics. This series looks like it will be cool. Keep it up.

[Wind Finale - 02]

Good for a traced movie.

I think it's obvious that you're tracing from some anime shows like DB/Z and Kenshin, but that's fine with me (it's pretty much the same as using Sprites, but actually a bit harder)... as long as you don't try and deny it.

Anyway, the story is the most important part and it's much improved over your Dragonball series (which wasn't very good because it was a weird DB ripoff). Keep working on your writing skills and you might be able to pull off a nice looking series.

[The Performance Artist]

"It's funny because it's true."

I've suffered through some of these "Video Art" classes in College and I wish someone would have submitted one of these things to the teacher because it's exactly what I was thinking the whole time. You wouldn't believe some of the BS that goes on in that class and how the teacher manages to find a million meanings for crap video art performances.

The ending in the crib was great.
Good job, keep em coming.